Esther Sylvester

Hey, welcome to YWS! Have you posted on the Welcome Board yet? It's a great way to meet new people. It is under the "Community" tab. What a clever twist ...

Welcome to YWS! This site is a great way to hone your writing skills. Every one is friendly here and I hope that you will private message me if you ...

Back for another review! This is addicting. I like this scene. It is building up to something big, I bet. My biggest complaint here is the lack of context. You ...

Hey V, it's Esther! Remember me? If not, think "Chat". This was great. You actually got my heart rate up a bit. You have a great talent for suspense and ...

Hi! I'm here to review your piece! Goodjob. You left the reader with a cliffhanger that makes us want to read more. I liked this piece, but there are some ...

Hi Stori! I have never read the Warriors series before, but I liked this a lot. I'm generally not one for animal stories, but you pulled this off and it ...

Hola Tim! I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. PLOT: Well, well. This is an interesting premise. I certainly like the idea of a guy stuck in ...

Hey Lady! Since the reviewer above me did most of the work, this review will be short! STUFF I LIKED: -I like the descriptions. They let the reader know what ...

Hey Fruit! Mind If I call you that? Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here. I wanted to review you first so I am! Let's review! ...

Hey there! Esther Sylvester is here to give you a review. Yay, I liked this! I think you really have a knack for descriptions and the like. This was well ...

Hi there! REVIEW: Aw, this was short! I was wanting more. :( Next time, if this is a chapter for a novel, make the chapters longer. If this is a ...

Hello! I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. (since you said this is an essay, I will review it as such, not a book report.) Ah, the ...

Hi! So this was a solid piece-good job! Some of the descriptions were really great. I think the biggest problem for me was the transition here: As the curtains rolled ...

Hey Austenite! You don't mind if I review this, do you? I'll make it short I promise! Just a check here: Is this a James Bond novel? It seems to ...

Hey, I am Esther. Let's review this thing! (I will be reviewing this as a short story because you didn't say otherwise.) So I liked this. It wasn't too showy ...